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  • St John Fisher Catholic Primary School
  • Alvechurch Road, West Heath, Birmingham
  • West Midlands, B31 3PN
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Literacy

Today children we will be looking at how you can create suspense in writing. The video cuts off so the lesson is in 2 parts today. 

https://www.loom.com/share/cb98adaf0772480ebefe391b5dc5b701 Part 1

 

https://www.loom.com/share/50d36071514d4a1790702e6ab22ff0cd Part 2

 

Task

Rewrite the scene where the German bombers fly over from the point of view of Olive. Remember to include suspense in your writing through the use of different sentence lengths. Long for description, short for action. 

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